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awesome chapter. so much tension and drama. glad that snape told hermione he loved her - maybe it will help during their seperation.

I must say i am aplaed at the path you took but nonetheless it is attention grabbing

I must say i am appaled at the path you took but nonetheless it is attention grabbing, although appaled i love it and wish form more updates soon!

Oh no! Snape got sacked! What will Hermione do to Dumbledore. Go on the warpath?

Innogen

Oh shit! Didn\'t see that coming. Great chappie.

I can\'t read anymore! My eyes are tired, and the constant erratic errors are grating on my nerves. Have you, as the author, ever proof read your work? You use adult terminology and you write splendid metaphors, yet sentences like this: \"And yet, Her Hermione dtt thought it wawas a hopeless cause.\" seems to be a reoccurring error. Seems innocent enough... but chapter after chapter of the same errors gets a tad bit INFURIATING. The plot is a little odd, and too slow to take off in any interesting direction. (It may have gotten interesting after ch. 5, but I cannot press myself to finish) Does Hermione really have to be mental? She has never struck me as the obsessive compulsive type. Drastically skewing the characters seems to be a popular trend with fan fiction. A love starved, insecure, or sadist Severus... And a neurotic, obsessive, nympho Hermione. I think the next string of fan fiction to grace the web will depict Hermione as anorexic and Severus a truly caring soul that helps her recover. Honestly... Severus is a dick, that is no facade we see him put on for the sake of Draco as his fathers junior informant, as many Potter fans believe. Severus delights in being a sarcastic prick, he is not a closet kindred soul. Is this not what you love about him? Is Hermione not rational, intelligent, or well balanced enough to be depicted as sane? Is that not what you love about her? I feel rather cranky... Whether it is a result of sleep deprivation or a cumulative disappointment in fan fiction as a whole, I know not. *Sigh* I\'m going to bed.

Wow. Really rough and disturbing chapter. Well-written as always, and heart-wrenching. Can\'t say that I exactly enjoyed reading it, but it definitely had an emotional kick to it. I\'m almost afraid to look forward to your next post, it\'s that good. Thanks.

This is a great fic, though I thought you would like to know that it seems like a good portion of chapter 10 is missing. Just letting you know, anyways keep posting this wonderful work!

What a disturbing, dark, and well writen story. I can\'t believe how much I\'ve enjoyed reading it. Maybe enjoy is the wrong word... It\'s not an enjoyable story, but the story is compelling and it\'s interesting. I really hope to read more soon!

This is such a *satisfying* story. So much to take in that I constantly have to re-read sections to make sure I haven\'t missed what you are trying to say. Wonderful, thank you both.