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for Needfire

by Bicycle

person nesscafe
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! Is this how it\'s going to end? Is she really going to kill herself. So sad and so very selfish! Doesn\'t she realize what this will do to Snape? Oh I shudder to think of what you are going to have happen next. She\'s going to succeed isn\'t she? She\'s going to die. :c(
person Lu Ling Qi
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey i am sad at this insatllment and angry that you left such a cliff hanger, put me out of my misery and update soon pls!
person atendoft
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have had a discustingly happy childhood without any of the disturbing ideas portrayed here, however, I do have a very dear friend who is not so fortunate and I can understand the mixed feelings and confusing thoughts expressed here. I congratulate you for being able to express all this in such an elegant way - you really should think of a way to publish this.

person herumal
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How on earth did you get to this Hermione from the Hermione of the books? How can bright, hardworking, sensible Hermione become this sad, pathetic wreck of a human being? It doesn\'t make any sense.

Hermione isn\'t like this. Not at all.
person Anon
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please I want to see what is acurring back at hogwarts
person mimi
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sigh, I absolutely can\'t praise this story enough! You two are two of the best writers I\'ve seen on this site.
person nesscafe
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t remember if I\'ve reviewed this story, so I wanted to let you know that I wasn\'t a fan in the begining, but I kept reading and now I\'m totally in love w/ it! I must have been in some kind of stupid mood when I read the first few chapters. I don\'t know, but this is a great story and I can\'t wait for the next installment
person innogen
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still find this incredibly intense. I still can\'t believe Dumbledore sacked Severus...but like you said. In real life he would have been sacked. I love this story, and I need to give more detailed feedback on your webpage--this last week or so has been pretty bad depression wise, plus, I have been having migraines. Plus, I\'m OCD about editing things I shouldn\'t: I feel quite pathetic. Is Beta Compulsion an official disease? We\'ll have to discuss it sometime. ~Innogen
person Lu Ling QI
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
as always it is a pleaseure and i hope you update soon for this story is just to much
person Lu Ling Qi
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pls pls update soon you are killing me i must know more:)