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for Needfire

by Bicycle

person Pandora Nervosa
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What an intriguing start! I've admired your individual work and am excited abouts cos collaboration. I'm off to pimp this on my journal. I eagerly await the next chapter.
person lizz
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
both of you are doing a wonderful job. i can't wait for the next segment.

cheers,

lizz
person Hephastus
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keptin, keptin! The ship, she floats! I am so proud of both of you. There is so much fantastic writing in this and I am still enjoying reading it for the third time. Can't wait for the third chapter. You should both congratulate yourselves on developing new facets to these already fascinating characters. I remain a fan always, Helen
person RachelW
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so very glad you mentioned that the story is already complete. This is a breathtaking opening. Also, I generally do not like it when elements of Wicca, Druidry and so forth are brought into fanfic (I'm a Norse Heathen, so it's not that I'msed sed against the religion) but it often doesn't mix well. I believe that the way you have done this is spectacular. It promises to be a very, very good and and I am looking forward to reading all of this story.