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September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you need to reformat this. There's a lot of garbage at the beginning and end and you have to keep scrolling from left to right because the lines are so long.
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September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A quick note from the authors...
If you read chapter 5 first thing today, or TRIED to...it had a bit of trouble loading. JUST LOVELY. But it's fixed now, so please try again.
Thanks!
Bicycle Built For Two
If you read chapter 5 first thing today, or TRIED to...it had a bit of trouble loading. JUST LOVELY. But it's fixed now, so please try again.
Thanks!
Bicycle Built For Two
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September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah that's much better. I'll be watching this carefully to see where you take it. Thanks for writing.
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September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...just wow. So poignant and insightful, so tense and disturbed all at the same time. Usually I try to eagerly make guesses as to where the story is going, but in this case I'm just waiting to see and will look forward to enjoying the journey wherever it goes.I chI check daily for updates...story is done, yes? Please upload more chapters quickly.
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an incredibly compelling and well drawn portrait of Hermione. I found Snape's ritual felt "right" and resonated on many levels. I look forward to more of this story. It's richness surprised me, but it shouldn't have, coming from two writers I have enjoyed so much in the past. Continue please.
Bloodcult of Freud
Bloodcult of Freud
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It's so great to see this work up here. You're individual efforts are stunning in their searing imagery and literary eloquence, I'm delighted to read (again) what the two of you create together! Hermione and Severus are both dysfunctional and isolated ewithwithin a sea of humanity. How they cope alone is fascinating, and then what will happen when they 'recognize' each other?
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And, I'm not usually such an idiot with my spelling... please replace 'you're' with 'your' -- I changed thought directions as I wrote...
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another marvelous chapter! I am such an ineloquent reviewer, but I will try to make sense. I am fascinated by Hermione's attraction to Snape and the comparisons she makes between the two of the: he is filthy and she is clean, yet this is an attraction for her. It's such a 'forbidden' piece of fruit in Hermione's eyes - the unwashed Professor. Not because he is her professor, but because he's the opposite of her. Umm, or maybe I'm completely wrong. ;)
Eagerly await the next chapter!
Eagerly await the next chapter!
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it. I'm at work. I promise a proper review later.
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see an update. This looks like such a lovely and unique story. I do hope updates will be frequent!