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for Hidden Gray

by Gray

person u wish u knew
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u have to write more this is to cool harry\'s so ooc with the whole goth thing please write more i have to read more
person izzaboo22neo
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love it, write now soon plz!
person Anon
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sweet. i love how this is going
person dru
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another incest pairing? well if its slash and weasleys then count me in... actually i really wouldn't care who it was ^_^ I love this fic. Can't wait for the next part
ja dru ^_^V
person warconq
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the Drusilla look-a-like. She is one of my faves too. Are you kidding this is a great story and I don't think that Harrys out of character. He's a very reserved young man and he thinks diabal thl things too. Its just your randn ofn of his character. I really like Rika-jyn. I hope he isn't the villian of the stroy. More like a misunderstood supporting character. Ah, that was no pun intended. Really. I'll reveiw agian. Till your next chapter.
person warconq
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhhh! Shopping Trip! I hope you get Severus all dressed up and where's the kink. I need to see some kink. I hope you continue this. Till your next chapter.
person warconq
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love your Oc's. All seem to have the beautiful goth boy theme but I'm not complaining about it. I do like that all the OC's you have are visually similar but their characters are different. Sutle but different. I personally really like this fic so far. I'm gonna continue reading and I'll update a few chapters later and praise the glory that is the Dassi-chan. Till I finish your next chapter.
person Empress
schedule September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know you totaly skipped chapter 4 right?
person PrideAndPrejudice
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting to say the least. I really want to hear more, wish the chapter(s) were a little tinny bit longer. But I know it can be hard and not as fun to write long worldwinds of chapterealleally Really want and can't wait to read more if you choose to post more. Please do.
PAP
person sak
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That is quite the interesting OC. I would be interested in reading about what develops.