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That was really really really good! I was crying at the end... Im so pissed that Lucius couldnt even say Im Sorry... What a freaking bastard! haha Thank's for writing this and for many people to read and enjoy!!!

do u mean thats it? no more? =(. personally i think that you should continue until everyone is old and grey... but i tend to writee ree really drawn out stuff, so u can ignore me... but neway, i really like it. is there a sequel? please? lol.

luv much, mara

heres another review, now that i\'ve finished it so far:
i like it. im surprised to say that i really like it. usually i dont go for stuff this dark, but your writing is fabulous and fascinating. and there is actually a plotline! heh. although for my own piece of mind i really hope that lucius is on some sort of drugs that are imparing his thinking, becuase its kinda frightening the pain that he is willing to inflict. all in all, though, i like it! keep it up, im curious as to how this is gonna end.

mara

i like the fic so far. a bit dark for me, but still good (i havent finished this chapter yet, so my opinion might change, but i wont blame u. heh.) neway, right after lucius smashes the liquor bottle severous said/thought \"//Brave Gryffindor...he won\'t be able to break you. I\'ll kill him if he does...//\" did you mean to say IT\'ll kill him...? im not quite sure and it could really change how i read that whole part. just thought i\'d mention that.

well, i must be twisted because i liked this one. But i cant believe its complete?! It started to roll well right from the start and I feel like i have been left hanging. Hope you get some more chapters up to comlete a well told dark tale.

If that\'s it, you are truly evil. Having said that, I must compliment you on creating a truly masterful story. It\'s insidious tone truly connected the reader to the characters. Morality and what is good whatwhat is evil is so ambigious, which is something that others have tried and failed to convey, but you do wonderfully. I can\'t wait to read more! :-) Tiffany

I love the ending. Very powerful.

Whee! Well, this\'ll be the second time I\'ve read this fic in a very short while. O.o It\'s good, though! And I, er, have little to do. Wait, that\'s not praise. Oh, and speaking of which... that moron that\'s been going around leaving flames on different fics of yours under assumed names--hoo, boy, they make me laugh. It\'s so pathetic. And like you said, it isn\'t as if you couldn\'t tell... they\'re not even very good at hiding what they\'re doing. Actually, to be fair, they completely suck at it. Heh heh! Besides, like they know what the hell they\'re talking about. *snort* You rock my socks. Hell yeah, keep it up. ^.^ Oh, one tiny thing concerning gra... ... difference between \"then\" and \"than\". Aah, I always hate leaving criticism because I feel like I\'m being some sort of snotty know-it-all. I\'m not trying to be, honest! It\'s constructive critisicm, says I. ^^;

\"And according to this, the secret ingredient is... love?! Okay, who\'s been screwing with this thing?!\"

i was looking around the internet a few days ago, looking for a fic that i felt in the mood for, then i saw mentioned to this fic, and relized this was the fic i wanted to read (random urges for diffrent fanfiction have sent my scurring all over the internet lately), so i reread it. as delightful as the first times reading.

So glad to hear you two are back togeather. :) Cheers to that.
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One of the best fics ever written. I bow to your writing genius. :)