rate_review Reviews

omg love the story and i can't wait for the next chapter!

aaaaaaaaaah( screaming like a banshee) God I love your story!please update really soon.

I'm interested. Julian Grey, eh? I'll stick around to see how this pans out. You do have an interesting wng sng style, which fortunately for you, doesn't suffer from lack of variation. While the raw talent is there, I am a bit concerned about the many typos and errors in the grammar and basic sentence structure. I read for a living, and while *I* know how the sentences are supposed to look and can still read the story, I also know that lesser attuned readers will take one glance and click *back* because they'll be so distracted by your mistakes. The most obvious mistake is your miss spelling of Sirius in the first chapter. A few typos can get by without much fuss from reader

well I think that if miss granger dosn't want to die of cancer she can leave .
And I luuuuv Juliaaaaan.