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PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY PLEASEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hmmm... great chapter. I thought that due to Harry\'s past he would\'vbe understood Abby\'s situation, but there again the whole paternal love thing...
He seems rather... powerless in this fic, there is something missing in ur fic i can\'t quite explain, tis good though...
Can\'t wait for more
Chow for now!

Poor Abbey! Can\'t wait for chapter 10! Alyssa is asking for trouble by not telling Harry. What happens next?

Very good chapter!

You may want to adjust Alisia\'s word choice and sentence formation. She\'s supposed to be a little girl but she is speaking like an adult, and a well worded (and pathos-oriented) one at that - her words aim to sting, and her thoughts and descriptions of her emotions are formulated as those of an adult.
On a side note - she annoyed me so much in this chapter - boo hoo, so the girl found out her parents are human. The world and her parents don\'t owe her anything. I know you know that, the bits where Harry and Hermione are speaking show it, but I just needed to express what she made me feel.

How sad all the way around. At least Alyssa has Abbey. Harry is alone with the pain. Yet again. Of course the girl wouldn\'t understand. What was Harry \'posed to do? Tell her about her other father and let her know that the man didn\'t want them? He gave her the perfect childhood. Harry did the best he could. I hope the girl understands that. Oh I need chapter 9! Where is Draco? What is Hermione and Ron going to do? Sit back and just be there for their friend?

:O ooooooo she knows... ooo why did he leave ?!

Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 8! What will they tell her? All of it? Everything Draco did?

This was an awesum story! I really wish Draco and Harry would have gotten back together. Very original. Not just a PWP with lemonz and stuff. I liked this alot! Is there going going to be another chappy? Cuz you can\'t just leave it hanging there you know. Lol Like you said, you h8 reading cliffiez but you enjoy written \'em. LOL That\'z nice! ^_^ This was a very creative story. Brlliant! The plot was just awesum. You did a wonderful job and I can\'t wait to see the next chapter! Beautifully writen. So many complimentz, so little time. But you get my drift rite? Well, go on with your fabulous work! *two thumbz-up*

PLEASE UPDATE!!! I have to know what happens I love this story and I can\'t wait till the next chapter I hope things become ok between Harry and Draco and Alyssa accepts him...well UPDATE!