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by shini0angel

person PrideAndPrejudice
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First just let me saw wow. This is so strongly and amazingly writen. You do an above and beyond job of not just telling the reader what's going on but have a way of showing them. you've gotten past the discription part of writing and are into the action the felling and the being. I can't wait for more of this. Keep it up!