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for Of Beauty

by FunkyCharms21

schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oO *looksaround* That's mean, ending it there =) Well, a beautiful story it is and I absolutely love the pov changes (You are really good at it, sometimes when I read a ff it sounds disturbing). Un til chapter 9 (if that is the chapter before the rome episode) I always thought: 'It'S so unfair that Sirius gets laid (alqways in a totally hot way) and Remus is getting nothing *blabla*' I felt/feel so sorry for him. I want a jeaulous Sirius xD oh god, don't take me serious! Write whatever you want, I'll definitly like it, anyway.
After I read the 11th chapter I thoguht to myself: 'Think positively' and then it came to my mind that now I have enough fiction to create many many dreams, or whenever I'm bored I can think of a possible end :)
Thanks for shring this wonderful ff. >.<
It was above all things extremely HOT!
person maria
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey this story is getting very interesting. keep it up. update next chapter soon.
person Silvara
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sulks* I want the next part! I know you\'re proably busy with the Holidays and all, but it\'s been 3 1/2 MONTHS since the last update. Can we have another chapter, PLEASE???? *looks cute*
person Trix
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a fascinating fic. At first I thought it a little ridiculous that Sirius would be that active at 14, but I guess some kids are right? But I think you are really working the Sirius/Remus angle really well.

I don\'t know if you plan on updating, but maybe before the Marauders meet up in Diagon Alley, Sirius can run into Cameron again, unintentionally, to see how he feels about the previous summer - embarrassed? Unhappy? Indifferent? ANyway, not my place right? Hope you update soon.
person Wolf
schedule November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! I\'m going to have a heartattack, I just realized how much I have missed this story! I\'m telling you, you are one of the best and i\'m not just saying that. The description, every single thing you write has an impact on my emotions. You are such a tease, you know that?? I really want to see Remus pleading his love for dear Sirius and visa versa. I\'m sorry I didn\'t review in a long time, school just took my precious time away. Oh I say again I love you and your story. *Laughs* What a long review, ey? Just simple beautiful.
person Quinn-Goblin
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You have a great story; I\'m generally a ghost but I wanted to encourage you to keep it up:) My peice of advice is to use the spell check if you have one; the spelling mistakes take the focus away from your story-line. I love your rendition of the characters, especially Sirius. :D Keep up the good work!
person kat_hallin
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
UN FUCKING BELIVEABLE!!!!!
It WAS amazing!!! Promise me you\'ll continue on this!
It\'s amazing! I just love it!
Are Remus and Sirius getting together???
PLEASE!! Tell me that they will!
They will fit together perfectly ;oP ;oP
You really should post the next chapter....
Before the fans will eat you alive :o)
I will be waiting!! And remember!
Eat YOU alive!!

Love Kat ;o)
person IceBlade740
schedule September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG wow!!! I luv this!!! ANd how is Cameron? Seems hot. ^_^ Now, he and Sirius shagging like mad weasels is all nice and sexy; quite satisfactory even, but what about Sirius/Remus? =^-^= I luvluv that pairing!!!
Okay, I luv your fanfic sooooo muh it hurts. Cuz it\'s awesome and just delightful to read! =^o^= Please continue!
0_o You already did continue. Baka me. Gomen. Well, enough of my nonsense and foolish-ness, I will now ped ted to continue to read this lovely fanficcu! ^______
Ice
person SpiritFighter
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WAI! wonderful wonderful! you must continue because the anticapation is killing me! you dont see many stories about the story of James,Remus,Sirius, and peter! of the ones i have read yours is definatly my favorite!

Waiting for the next chapter,
SpiritFighter
person LadyTess
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story is absolutely fantastic. I\'ve really enjoyed everything you\'ve written. The story just rolls along smoothly. I really enjoy a story that can keep me interested everystep of the way! I can\'t wait for your next installment. Please make it quick and keep up the outstanding work.