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for Tonight's The Night

by andihooper

person tonksamus
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey! I love your writing style and your humor is FABULOUS. So far this is not what I expected--but very good! You add details that make the story so lifelike and engrossing! Please update soon :)
person D
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better and better.
person HPfreak18
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this and I can't wait for more!!!
person slytherinswn
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And And!............?
person lilil
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhhhhh no no no dont stop here Hie hie hie //wink wink// I read this chap over and over! Just Great! :):) Update soon,Thank for your great work!
person The Rampant One
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh!!! Don't stop there!! lol I need to read more! ^_^ Keep the story coming!

::The Rampant One.....'Tis The Drunken Monkey!!::
person apparateawaydm
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! update!!!! wahoo! omg this ff is sooooo great! omg!!!!!!! that was mean though..ending it so suddenly..brilliant..but mean! haha
cant wait until u update!
person Luna
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I find myself really enjoying this fic. The plot is unique and the characters are IC. I'm glad that Cho showed up or else Hermione is going to end up having sex with Harry.

And Draco, snarky and funny, just the way I like him. Romantic, too. I can't believe that he would do something like that for Hermione. Maybe he really cares for her. He wouldn't stop doing what they were doing just to tell her a few "rules". He dimmed the lights, played music, and asked her to dance with her. If he just wanted a shag, he would just seduce her and jump right into doing the action. And the no first-name basis, I think he's the one who's afraid of getting attached to Hermione.

I'm just worried how this fic would end. Is he still going to get married to Pansy? I know he doesn't want to. I hope the next chapter would be up soon, or make them longer.

I've analyzed your foc too much so I'll shut up now. :)
person Incarnation
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that's really really good!! Can't wait to see more - please update soon! =3
person magictrousers
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Evil cliff hanger ? why come on I 'm begging you write more ! Me likes and me master likes it infact he promises to give me a good spanking if you write more .! LOL . Hail! Hail! Hail! Much love !