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for Foreign Marriage

by LRThunder

person Meep
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! I hope you\'ll be updating soon, and when you do, can you please e-mail me if it\'s not too much trouble. I just really like your story and would like to know when the next chapter\'s up. So yeah, update soon!

--Meep
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person writerlimn
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed your story. I'd hoped for some more but I jchecchecked out your list of stories and have lost all hope. I see a long list of stories, written over the past two year, all with one or two chapters. Apparently you have a short attention span. That's fine for you, I guess, but it's pretty rotton for those of us who read your stories. Why start a story if you have no intention of finishing it?
person Meg
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story. I hope you add more to it soon.
person Sarahamanda
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter. It is a good chapter. update soon.
person sanjana
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hiya! i liked it! a lot!! its great to read a hermione/viktor fanfic. dont seem to find them a lot. i really hope u update soon!
love, sanjana
person din's fire
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
to tell u the truth I am a Hermione/draco shipper but this story and plot ( is that the same thing, any way) intrigues me also by the fact i really see a Hermione/viktors storys any way and i am looking forward to the next chapter
person raven
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"...The law in question is titled 'The Law for the Preservation of Magical Bl and and it requires all muggleborns to marry a pured, id, if said muggleborns or purebloods are not married nor are capable of reproducing." -May want to change that-disqualified if married or can't reproduce but that sentence...well-doesn't indicate thatme pme problem with "...for over a couple of years..." It doesn't relay the idea well either.

Nice catch on the cursing.
person laceyweasley
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love MLC but I've often wanted to see one involving someone other than the hg/ss pairing. The first 2 chapters were very interesting and well written. I can't wait to see where you go from here.
person Ruth
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this. This is defenitely a different take on the whole issue, nice. I am very interested to see where oyu go with this. Good job and please update soon!!

~Ruth
person Cwolf
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Too lazy to Sign in) Anyway I usually don't come into this section but the summery caught my attention. So far I'm really enjoying the story. Can't wait for more. Keep up the good work.