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for The Unmarked Potion

by Lunadeath02

person Kae
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This totally needs more chapters!!!! It was great!! It flowed and was a great easy read!! ^_^
person Haretsu
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMFG yessssss...
*worships you*
It\'s really frustrating when you really want to read NC-17 and then you find NC-17 fics and what do the guys do? They give each other blowjobs! Thank you for writing a fic where is actual shagging! Thank you thank you thank you...
person D. Valentine
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story.Very Nicely done.If you do decide to continue it please let me know.
person FangyChick
schedule March 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really good s!!!!!!!! make a sequal... or more chapters or something!
person Anonymous Lovely
schedule March 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I thought this was a good fic, but confusing. Did Draco give harry a vagina, or am I just confused? I\'m not sure if Harry could do all the holding of Draco without facing him, and I think we all know our ass\'s are behind us ;) I dunno. I might\'ve just gotten confused.

The writing was extraordinary. I like how you played them. :) Keep writing!
person xikum
schedule March 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was tremendous fun!...any more of this continued anywhere??
Was Snape thinking of cuasing a little uh, extracurricular activity?
Unmarked lust potion, and a suggestion that Harry smell the unmarked potions to ID them?