rate_review Reviews

Nice tying together of agendas. Gives us readers an idea of what\'s going on with Dumbledore, Lucius, and Draco. Too bad it looks like Blaise in determined to be shallowly interfere. Can\'t wait to find out what what happens to Harry with Blaise and if anyone (Draco, Severus) will be able to save him.

Recently I decided to reread To Have and To Hold and noticed that on chapter 3, Snape and Harry are snogging and suddenly the scene changes to Harry talking to Hermione and Ron about the trustworthiness of Snape? Is parts of the fic misplaced or missing? I\'m also interested if you are posting this fic elsewhere? A Big Fan.

i could cry
some of your story is missing
please fix it and up date soon

oh no!!!
Harry has been hit by a spell....im quessing it was blaise... :(
oh dear, oh dear....
cant wait for more!!
XxX

Were you sorted into Slytherin? How can you end a chapter like that? You are evil. Evil, evil, EVIL!

I\'ve been following this story for a good few months, but this is my first time commenting. I just wanted to say that this is one of the best Snape/Harry fics I\'ve read and I love your treatment of the characters. They may be performing out of character tasks at times, but it certainly doesn\'t feel that way. They still act very much like themselves in situtations that they wouldn\'t find themselves in normally, especially Snape. I love his internal monologue. Keep up the great work and for the love of all that is sacred, PLEASE update quickly! I don\'t know if I can stand not knowing what happened to Harry (though I have a pretty bad feeling about it).

Thank you for your great story! I have enjoyed each new chapter.

Thank you for your great story! I have enjoyed each new chapter.

Let me start by confirming that I love this story, to leave us the readers on a cliffie like this is very cruel, to help
our suffering you need to update soon, very soon, PLEASE.

Now one of the reasons I really enjoy this story was that Harry was strong and in control, he knew more than the
rest, now we have Severus and I understand that he\'s scared becuase finally he has Severus but he was incontrol
now he\'s waiting and being told by others.

I love the fic so far, but sometimes it seems some words are missing or globbed together. I would advise using a spell check or finding a beta to read it over. (If you don\'t have one, you can email yourself in Yahoo mail, and use the free spellcheck option there!)

I don\'t mean to be nosey because I AM reading the fic for the STORY, not for the spelling or grammar or whatnot, but it does sometimes mess with the plot, in my opinion, if I am not certain exactly what a character said or did. It\'s distracting.

I love the inner voice of Snape, and how he snuck in on him making that potion! Beautiful scene with the kiss! Can\'t wait to read the next chapter.


DH

AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

poor Harry..
what will happen, no that Blaise has him? (and it is Blaise, isn\'t it?)

please write more soon :D :D
thx :)

Lils