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wow this is getting good cant wait to find out what happends next!!!

Alright, so I\'m addicted to this story. Please, please, please post another chapter soon! (I really want the rest of the story, but a chapter will make me happy for now) I hope that Draco and Severus figure out a way to keep Harry from going to Voldemort, but maybe Harry will be able to defeat the smarmy ho once and for all!

I think that this fic is outstanding.

I have been meaning to review this story forever. I really like it. I love stories that show Harry as someone more complex. Trying to hide all of his pain and problems from everyone, and dealing with them all alone. Giving him more intelligence and skills with magic also made me happy.

Having Snape hear Harry conversation in the beginning was so great. =^_^= It is so cute how Snape takes care of him and keeps giving him potions that make him pass out. And even cuter how Harry still tries to run away. I love how it starts off with the intense kissing. The sex is great. It is always fun when it is a little rough.

Making Draco and his father not really evil made me happy. ^_^ The kissing scene between Draco and Harry was great. I love seeing Snape jealous. ^_^!

The voice in his head was a good touch. ^_^ I believe I have read the story you got the idea from.

It has been so long since I have read the story I have forgotten a lot of the details of it. @_@ Poor Harry though. That was horrible how Zabini beat him up while he was tied down and defenseless. :( I was kind of looking forward to what Voldemort had planed for him. *sniffs* Oh well I am sure he will get the rest of his deserved punishment by the end of the story.

Keep updating, your story is great!!! ^_^

Uh oh, I guess the plan backfired. Great chapter, loved every minute of it

OH MY GOSH!!!

I can\'t wait to see where this is going to go. You have to get the next chapter up soon. I wish it was complete already so I could read on and see what is going to happen next. Please update soon.


Peace

Love your fic *giggles* please e-mail me whenever you update soon!!!

Just want to say how much I\'m enjoying this story. It\'s well-written, and the characters stick fairly close to canon, considering. I only have one critism, (constructive!), and it\'s that there are numerous typos throughout the story. Not little things like \'i\' before \'e\' but entire words and phrases that have been mashed together. These typos greatly disrupt the flow of the story, and sometimes it is difficult to discern what exactly you meant to say. I\'ve copy-pasted two example from about 3/4 through chapter 5:

\"Green eyes snapped back to meet and and y loy looked ready to either shy away or explode. Severus

Please dont let that dickhead Blaise rape Harry! PLEASE!!!! I love him being so innocent! If he gets raped i\'m never ever ever goint to read your work again! Now that thats over, i love your stoy your begining was really awesome! I also love the way Serverus thinks to himself and how he\'s always complamenting Harry and i love harry\'s firey spirt! i dont really like that he\'s gonna bottom too but, what can you do? Please keep writing and i\'ll keep reeiwing!

Thank you so much for letting me know the fic continued here. I know it was Blaise you hexed Harry just now. I can\'t wait to see what will happen next chapter. Ooooh I love possessive Snape. I hope he makes Blaise bleed.... a lot. lol The story is great.