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for To Have and To Hold

by MontanaDan

schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i swear i just love this story. The ending of that last chapter was really wonderful. Please continue soon

Amazing Job! - Jessica
person Piksi
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh!!! Pah-lease! update asap! I need to read the finish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *glomps you x two*
person Sailor Sol (too damn lazy to sign in)
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU SADISTIC LITTLE @)*%)@(*%)(@&%)(@!!!!!!!

How DARE you use a cliffhanger like that! AAAAGGGGHHH!!!

Sorry, I lost my cold-blooded calm for a moment. I\'m better now.


more?

please?
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bloody Hell you have me caught on this story... PLEASE update soon!!!
person The Siren
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been reading this story for awhile now, but never knew you could review without having an account on this site. Oh, well. I\'ll make up for lost time. I am loving this story! It has such excellent character development and plot! I do hope you continue soon. I\'m not sure if I could wait as long as I did last time for an update.
person antipyro
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please post soon or tell me where the story is posted.

You are an amazing writer. All the little details make is sooooo delicious, but it\'s your writing of the intimate connection and passion Severus and Harry have for each other that make me lust for more. I\'m enthralled.

Ohhh, the rapture, it\'s soooo captivating. I can\'t read anything else.


antipyro
person kk
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhh oh no!!!! what are they going to do?? and someone skewer and bbq zabini please!

=D i\'m so hooked. no wild monkey sex? right snape, keep on telling your self that.

person eve/roarke
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, your writing just keeps getting better, but just at this moment I wish I could do to you what
you had Harry do to Blaize.

There should be a law, a commitee should be set up, we need banners stating \"fanfic writers must not be cruel to
fanfic readers\", because there is no doubt you are being cruel Montana you\'ve finished this chapter on such a cliffie
that the mountain is subsiding with the weight of readers expectations.

Please update soon. very soon, I\'m on my knees begging.
person Justajester
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Teh Voldster is too evil for yo-ou
person shelly101
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, that was amazing! Blaise=bastard. Excellent job! please update more soon!! thanks