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for To Have and To Hold

by MontanaDan

person The Siren
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I\'m so glad you updated... this chapter was very intense, very drawing. One more chapter? I can\'t believe it! One of my favorite stories on the web is going to end... Well, I\'m sure you\'ll make it a great chapter. Please update soon!
person icestar
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:claps hand excitedly: oh it got updated! sweet!

nice chapter, liked the way he decided transforming was better than the death curse. giving in to hatred once and all that.

anyways, very nice, now all it needs is the cavalry to come in and gape... :sniggers:

hope to see an update
person nerak
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you updated!!!! i can\'t wait till the next chapter!!!

not just in this chp but throughout the whole fic, i just LOVE severus\' inner voice. it\'s sad and satisfying at the same time that you\'re wrapping up this wonderful piece! hoho nice way for voldie to die. and i\'ll say that\'s just punishment for zabini. hmm can\'t wait...
person Hambares
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a story I wish would go on forever, but alas....
Great chapter!
person Aunt Bijou
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No, no, no, no!!! You can\'t stop here!! ooooo evil, evil, you are evil!!! And good! Mustn\'t forget, you are gooood! Please, keep going, and update soon! I don\'t think my poor abused ticker can take more of this!
person antipyro
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh.....Bravo!

I couldn\'t have imagined Voldemort\'s death anymore simply....way better than Avadra Kedavra. Brilliant!!!

and love wins in the end.....ahhhhh
person Phantomtale
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the conversation between Volde and Harry. Very plausible! But, Oh, you evil, evil fiend. How could you leave it there?
person cdkobasiuk
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man I\'ve been waiting a while for this. Good chpater.

cdk
person Joanne
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was evil leaving us hanging like that pleaseeeeeee update soon I cant wait to see how this will end!
person eve/roarke
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant very Brilliant chapter. But its cruel, please, closing a chapter on such
a cliffie.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON, FOR THE SAKE OF MY SANITY.

THANKS FOR A BRILLIANT STORY. BY THE WAY, YOU WERE WORRIED AT ONE
STAGE ABOUT YOUR SLASH WRITING, DON\'T WORRY ANYMORE, GREAT.