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for To Have and To Hold

by MontanaDan

person Kalisin
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! i hate you! you can\'t leave me hanging like that! PLEASE update soon... i am probably going to get very emotionally distraught if you don\'t!
person nacht kind
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um......I love your story, really(sshp rocks my socks!!).....but AFF seems to be having a problem.....now, I\'m not entirely certain about the other chapters, though a few endings gave me pause, but, based on your beginning author\'s note in chapter six, I KNOW chapter five was cut short, cause I did not get to the lovin\', I got to harry being pissed about dumbledore and sev\'s inner voice saying \'He has a valid point\'.....but that\'s it.......I\'m like a crack addict that suddenly got cut off! HELP ME! I\'m going to look, but if your could, I\'d appreciate you emailing me other sites where your story is posted.......Pretty please?::sparkle sparkle::
person JJ
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is HOW DO YOU COME UP WITH THESE BLOODY MARVELOUS IDEAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I\'ve enjoyed your story so much, I\'ve visited libraries when I had to be out of town to keep up. Aside from the glitches, the story is very well written and the action and diologue are skillfully intertwined. I LOVE Snapes inner voice and Harry\'s cynisism. You may not have set out to kill Voldy, but you were right and it had to be done to complete the story line. I just hope that if you go with the \'Severes was only going along with Potter to help him defeat the dark lord when he didn\'t really love him - says Sirius,\' you don\'t keep us tortured too long before he gets his butt whipped and Snape and Harry make beautiful potions together forever. I really hope you have more story to tell.
person sethian
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait to see what\'s coming, A happy ending? hihi finally some place under the sun for little Harry ! ^.^
person JJ
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am totally loving your story!! You have made Harry very realistic - he\'s strong, but fragile too. He\'s been through hell, has a long way towards it still to go, and he has scars from how far he has traveled. Like a real person Harry is complex, and so very interesting because of it! I really enjoy Snape\'s inner voice. It gives us a picture of another complex character who has a rich and interesting internal life that has been subjugated to his survival and the role he must play to help win the war. I\'m determined to read the entire story, and enjoy it too! But in Chapter 3 the story goes from Snape kissing Harry to the end of a diologue between Harry, Ron and Herm. about what happened. WHAT HAPPENED????? The site must have a glitch and it hurts the story line (and frustrates those of us who want to enjoy your plotting) to have that obvious cut. Any chance it could be fixed?
person yana
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story!!!!
please update soon.
person shelly101
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! amazing!!!!!!
person Katie
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*has been reading this all weekend* UGH! It stops there?! Well, I hope the more reviews you get the quicker you write out the next chapter! O, this is/was so good! *loves to death* Keep it up! You are doing a wonderful job! <3333
person adorinea mikyo
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE I BEG YOU UPDATE SOON!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO US FAITHFUL READERS!!!!!!!!!! DAMN CLIFFIES!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
person Lizzie
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
evil! leaving it like that is pure evil i tell you!

awesome story. one of the few snarry fics that has captured me and made it so i couldn\'t not read.

update soon please! *begs* ^.^