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for To Have and To Hold

by MontanaDan

person mysticsong
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My best friend suggested I read your story; she roped me in with the \"I\'ll just have to find another DE to have sex with .. . . . Well, that wouldn\'t do!\" bit! I THOROUGHLY enjoyed it. Whole thing --> marvelous!
person Tragedy
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! My! God!
I just read through that whole thing and it\'s so great!
I really love that story!!
Please post soon!
person JJ
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, please write a sequal in which Snape and Harry triumph in the end! You\'re such a good writer that I\'ve enjoyed your story very much. But I can see you setting up a sequal in which Lucius battles Snape for Harry\'s love. You practically screamed it in your epilogue. Oh, well. At least I know it will be an awesome story. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us!!!
person Amaya
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffs* The ending to a good story is always sad. I am so excited that you are doing another one though. *bounces* I can\'t wait to see what happens between Harry, Snape, and Lucius. *laughs evilly*

I am glad Voldemort is now dead. That means in the next story he will be out of the way and no having to stress over him. Hopefully that will also mean more attention on sex and relationship stuff. =^_^= I enjoyed how you killed him (wow that sounds evil). I have never been one to get into big battle scenes. This was simple yet creative and ironic. Not to mention getting to see a jealous Snape when Lucius carried away Harry. I have to admit I like Lucius and Harry pairings even though I know it is odd. So I can\'t wait to see him chasing after Harry with a pissed Snape on his heels. *gets a mental picture* #_#

Hope you get your new story together soon. I can\'t wait until you post.
person antipyro
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too much Lucius and Draco in that one, but it sets up the next story so sinisterly, if that\'s a word???

I just loved this story from the first chapter. Your efforts are muchly appreciated.

Please don\'t wait too long to post the next story and if you do, please email me to let me know what it\'s called.

thank you very much.
person LPhoenix
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so loving you right now.. this story is wonderful..... *hugs you* all twisty and stuff.... keep up the good work..
person steffles
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great ending. I hope Harry doesn\'t have any more problems with his scar. I really like the setup for the next piece. The Malfoys are a pain in the arse, aren\'t they? I wonder how long Severus and Harry\'s relationship will be kept quiet? And how WILL Sev deal with Harry\'s fame when he\'s pulled along? Can\'t wait for the next segment. You write so well and make us feel the characters as you write them. I never mistake your characterizations for any other author\'s. You make them your own. Until the next fic!
person Alyson
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Can\'t wait until the next installment. If it\'s not too much trouble, would you mind emailing me when you post up the next installment? allieycosta@gmail.com , if it\'s not too much trouble. Toodles.
person DG
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved your story, one of the best HP/SS-stories I have read.
Always like stories where HP starts to use his slytherin side =)

Can\'t wait to see what will happen next, with Lucius and such.
anyways, looking forward to read more!

\'DG
person lupusdragon
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are evil. Evil I say. This is a fabulous story, but what an ending. I can\'t wait for the next part!