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for To Have and To Hold

by MontanaDan

person Griffinfire
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I hope you update really really soon.
person Lychee
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Merlin, he's been reduced to cliches." That was brilliant! Oh, do please continue. Besides the lovely thought of much snogging and shagging, I want to see what talents Harry's been hiding from everyone.
person Nicole
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Please update soon!
person Jo
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was GREAT! and hot and I can't wait for Chapter 2!!
person KNW
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start, you caught the characters perfectly. Congratulations on not making Harry seem weak, even if he is a victim. You're the first person whose writing has made me want to bother reviewing on this site, think that says a lot, so keep up the good work. Definitely have talent for writing, and talent for this fandom and pairing.
person leeva
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome story..please continue it!!
person Meine
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh GOD

please tell me you will update soon?

person Rob K
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your first chapter. i'm am looking forward to seeing where you take this.
person IGToW
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What an excellent beginning--will keep an eye out for more.
person konneko_nezumi
schedule April 7, 0000 at 12:00 AM
oh crap! they're actually gonna do it! i must shield my virgin eyes!!! LOL... great chapter! i seriously was blushing half the time though... i'm not much of a hentai... it's just the ratings at ff.net are so strict sometimes... and mediaminer isn't one of my favorite sites... cookies and such... anyway... they're reallie gonna go thru with it... wow... UPDATE! ::drool:: a horny Yuki... i wish I was the one to walk in...

-konneko-