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for To Have and To Hold

by MontanaDan

person Athena
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww....
I want more Please!!
person Mishap
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Oooh! good start, loved the mental voice for Snape. Mooon.oon...please, please, please!
person Agnes
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely writing!!!!
Realy; and I'm dying to know how this will continue.....
Keep it up!
person garnet
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*snorts* I love your snape, he's so...sooooo slytherin, a smug one at that.

hope you continue soon!
person Hannah
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. I normally don't do this, just reviewing so you update.
person Evelyn
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just..wow. That was amazing. I need more, please!
person xikum
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I Love this!! Sev recognizing what he wants, finding an acceptable justification, and going for it with full determination---now that he has ascertained that his attentions would be qiute welcome and reciprocated!
Yes!! More, plese!
This is my favorite fantasy premise, yet it is just such a very rare premise---usually Harry has to negotiate a hesitant Sev into the relationship, yet as a past true and current semi-practicing Death Eater (even 'just' a spy), I can't imagine that he would be too shy, once he decided what/who he wanted, and how he could negotiate any little complications to turn out to his benefit. Which he undoubtedly could, as intelligent, cunning, witty and powerfull as he is!
Again, Yes! I am sooo Happy you are writing this! More soon, please?
person Carol
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is your first? Wow, I am impressed. I think I'm going to love your Severus and Harry. I enjoyed Snape's inner voice, and I love a protective Snape with Harry. I am looking forward to see where this is going. Puss.
person PirateDucky (too lazy to sign in)
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! It's a really good plot so far (if there isn't a plot, just ignore my sditydity). The way Harry is made out to be in this story sounds how he would really be after the few years he's had at Hogwartz. I know I'd become a sarcastic bitch after everything, even if it were only in my mind. Anyway, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
person Feli
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww, this is so sweet... I really hope that you will continue writing this story, and that you will update quickly! I love your characterisation of both Harry and Severus. Please keep up the good work, you're doing wonderfully!