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for To Have and To Hold

by MontanaDan

person lucia
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awful lot of grammar mistakes in this one and is ch.4 missing its ending? good story otherwise
person Anon
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I kinda like the way Voldemort died, not too dramatic but not too fast either. I look forward to the sequel.
person Athlynne
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Terrific, great fun to read, as always is the case with your work!
person xx
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
guud
person Tffne
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is there going to be a sequal,is there already a sequal??How would Lucius try to steal Harry from Severus and will Snape ever bottom.Just curious!!!!!I love the story and am going to check out your others.
-Tffne
person harryhollow
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love your fanfic story! *giggles* harry and snape howlll.........heeheehee....
person Mikke
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In chapter one, Hermione leaves the cloak of invisibility behind a statue. Snape takes it and when Hermione leaves there is no indication that she found it missing. I half expected her to come barging in again in the middle of Snape and harrys kissing... I\'m just a little curious of Where the cloak is now. Does Snape have it or did he give it back to Harry and Why haven\'t Hermione mentioned it yet? (just read ch. 3 and figured it wouldn\'t show up later). The Story\'s good though ^^
person Missi
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous story!! Will there be a sequal? (I ask cause of the an) I\'ll watch for it, cause our Sev n Harry need eachother!!
person SilverPhoenix
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i loved this!!! very much so...and i really cant wait till the sequel...but PLEASE tell me that it wont be Lucius/Harry cuz well i wont beable to read it if i aready read it as a Snarry fic lol...i messed up reading a Harry/Draco fic that way lols *Hugs* i wish i said more but i cant think right now sorrys:<
person Quinny
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear Montana:

I loved this fic. Snarry is my favorite pairing, and you do it really well. I can\'t wait for the sequel. Hurry, hurry, hurry! You do give me a bit of a quandry, though, because I kind of like the idea of Harry and Lucius. I think Lucius is pretty hot, and he would be devastating if he could be written with a little bit of decency. Hmmmm.....the possibilities are pretty tempting.

-Quinny