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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First, thank you for telling me you updated! ^_^ I was really hoping you would get your update in soon too. This chapter went along very nicely, and ~pleeease~ have the next chapter up soon o.<. now school seems so much more bearable at the moment if I can come home to an update from you ^_~ Once again, great job!
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really excellent. I am so enamored with 'inner Snape', can I marry him? Please? No? How about a date then? No? Damn! Okay, then just update soon so I can enjoy more of his witty repairte. Oh, I love how Ron's only perseptive when it comes to sex (heh! just like a teenager).
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September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh you spoiled us, really you did. those kisses are hot. I agree with Harry, it's better to jerk off with a partner *G*
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September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT CHAPTER WAS APPYAPPY TO SEE A UPDATE CANT WAIT FORE MORE!
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such an awesome fic! I hope you update soon, because this is so damn interesting! Pleeease update soon!
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Um, when Hermione got back into the corridor, didn't she notice the Invisibility Cloak was missing? I kept expecting her to burst in and say, "Harry! Snape must be around." Or something.
I like the slow growth of the attraction and Snape's inner voice but the above is something of a screaming plot hole.
I like the slow growth of the attraction and Snape's inner voice but the above is something of a screaming plot hole.
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Um, when Hermione got back into the corridor, didn't she notice the Invisibility Cloak was missing? I kept expecting her to burst in and say, "Harry! Snape must be around." Or something.
I like the slow growth of the attraction and Snape's inner voice but the above is something of a screaming plot hole.
I like the slow growth of the attraction and Snape's inner voice but the above is something of a screaming plot hole.
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is fabulous so far; I can't wait to read more. You have a deft touch with dialogue and description, and the attraction between Harry and Snape is both hot and believable. Keep up the great work!
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi, please please update this story soon! i adore your take on harry and all the masks he wears as well as the sarcastic fairly canon snape you are using...i hate when authors decide thay snape really has a heart of gold and everything is pink roses and bunny rabbits by the end of the first few chapters! could you please email me when you update?? thanx.
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What an amazing start this is, and I am eager for more. My mind is really to knackered to say much more, just that I really like this story thusfar. Do you do e-mails when you update?