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that was great love the smut cant wait for more loveing this story!

I love it so far. Please hurry and write more.

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I wasn't sure how much I was going to like this wen I found it, but I think that was mainly because of the summery someone else had written of it. I actually really liked it and I'm enjoying every moment.

I am a little ashamed to sat that it's taken me about a week to read itbecause I kept being inturrupted and not able to get on the comptuer for a time (bloody work!), but it was well worth the effort.

The only thing I'm worried about now is the fact that I'm going to forget to check up on whether it's been updated! I would love to read more, and if you can be bothered, e-mailing me to let me kthatthat another chapter is up would be wonderful!

Keep writing (this is far better than my first slash story!)
Robert Andrew Frogg

man o man... wow, just wow. please update asap before i start to cry *eyes get big and watery* hehe

Well done. Crisp, naturally flowing dialog. Very believable eonalonal content. Intriguing characterization of Harry. I did not want to stop reading until I'd finished it.

Thanks...keep it up.

I love it!!!!!! Your Severus is so devious and, well, Snape-like, and yet so human. And your Harry is perfect. The whole concept of the masks he wears, and that he has abilities that no one but his friends are aware of, fits with the Harry developed in Order of the Phoenix exceptionally well. Both characters are very human. Fabulous work! I'll be recommending this one for sure! Can't wait for the fourth chapter.

I love your story so far I really hope you continue it

This is an amazing story... I love how it is going and how you bring out the characters. Please continue as soon as possible! I can't wait for more!

This was great frist three chapters are you going to update soon
I loved the way you started the stroy off by ron asking if he's ever
kissed a bloke.update son