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It goes without saying, that you're a very good writer. All I have to say is that whatevou wou write I seem to be addicted to and this one is no different. Though may I please request a D/H out of you sometime in the near future? This is really good so far. Severus's inner voice is great. Luckily you don't have to contend with the entire SS hating HP matter b/c they've already somehow managed to get close. For your first slash, you've done an excellent job. Although i'm still a bit foggy on what direction you'll be going, but wherever you end up going... I'm going to be hanging on for the ride ^_^.

*bounce, bounce, bounce* Oh, if only Voldemort had just waited a few minutes longer before calling the Death Eaters! I really love your writing, I have to admit this despite it making me insanely jealous. I hope this continues in the cery enjoyable direction that it's been taking so far. You know, there's soemthing about Severus/Harry that is just so... nice!

Love the kisses. It seems like it wont be long before their in the sack, but I'm glad for now they didn't jump straight into sex. Severus' thoughts inbetween are great. Sirius bought him a woman? *snort* :)

Wonderful - I can't wait to see where you're going with the Zabini thing - I can see Snape getting all jealous and possessive Snape - yeay. Oh and I love the blossoming relationship between Harry and Snape, very sweet and sexy.

"True, Potter had striking features but he usually looked tired and stressed. When he wasn

I just want you to know, that I imagine Severus and Harry the way you describe them in your fic. I love it when Severus is so firm, "dark" and ... funny! I`m waiting for another chapters!

I wrote my email wrong last time *blushes* I guess it`s because I was so overwhelmed by your brilliant fic ^.^

I'm enjoying this story very much. I like stories where Harry has "extra" ability, plus I like the way you have Snape reacting to his feelings about Harry.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Nice! Talk about mutuality. This is wonderful! Even better than just one going after the other.
Interesting how Sirius decided to have Harry introduced to sex...and how sad. It would appear that he's like Draco & Blaise, it's 'just sex'?
I am concerned about Blaise and Draco, though. Hopefully, not a problem of the nasty sort? It does seem that they are two different approaches to sex...Simple gratification, and meaningful relationship. Which I would guess that the Slytheriant,ant, too, just not yet...they're still into sowing their oats, so to speak? And Sev is older, wiser, and ready for the 'real thing'. Which, due to his sad upbringing, is all Harry really wants in life. Am I guessing it right?

Hmm. Are they young 'uns such followers? Are they DE's or DE's in training, as most suppose is the direction the 'real' books may go?
Gods, tho', it is scary to me that when Harry sleeps or is too tired, Voldie can get into his mind. That, I think, would be a real concern, a true put-off.

Yes, they need to be Very Careful, for more reasons than I ever thought...not to have their relationship be used against them to be blackmailed for information or used sexually, fodder for Voldie to use to trap Harry with... or torture Sev for his duplicity, oh my!
Great stuff! Please do continue. I was so glad to see another chapter show up!

Wow! I can't believe I had somehow missed the first three chapters of this wonderful story, but I'm so glad I saw the post on After Class about the fourth. This is exactly what I needed! A good, strong WIP with great characterization and excellent writing. Keep up the good work!

BTW...I mentioned this story on my lj at www.livejournal.com/users/bysshe. I thought my friends list would really enjoy it, if they haven't read it already.

--bysshe (your newest devoted fangirl)

Fabulous so far, please continue! I am loving it. The interaction is great and Snape's conscience is hilarious. Thanks for the laughs!