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CAN WE HAVE MORE PLEASE :0

A definite thumbs up on the love scene. A double portion of that for everything surrounding it. I will be waiting to see what they come up with to keep LV from marking Draco. I have a feeling that Harry's idea may be the only way - convincing LV that Draco has a chance with him and that a dark mark would ruin it. But, oh my, oh my, Severus isn't going to like that at all. Also woing ing if Draco sees things the same way that Lucius does. You certainly know how to keep things interesting.

cool story

I just wanted to say that I am REALLY enjoying your story. You've got the characters down perfect and aren't afraid to go slow in order to build the story and characterizations. Good work! I particularly like hearing Snape's inner voice. Looking forward to more chapters!

Er, what happened with Harry's eyesight? You said it took Snape a long time and several spells to correct Harry's eyesight originally and then, after the potion undid those spells, Harry never got the eyesight restored again. So....I'm confused on that front.

Other than that, all good. :D

*squees*

Have just found this and it's marvellous! I love it hugely. Have to say that you are making excellent use of Snape's inner voice, and I consider my confidence in you entirely vindicated. Harry being all cynical and Snape trying to figure him out is always a favorite thing with me, and you've portrayed it beautifully.

Also the bit where Snape wanked Harry rocked my slashy socks.

Hope to see more soon, with lots of Snape taking care of Harry and loving him and just being Snapish, much love,

diagonalist (and this could just be anyone pretending to be me, couldn't it? scary thought)

Oh this is just wonderful! Very real and sexy. I can't wait for the next part.

This fic is very original in presentation if not in general plot. You wrote nicely too and your humor is wonderful.

cdk

This is a fantastic story. I really do hope you continue with it. You have Snape's voice spot-on and it's very interesting getting into his head. Also, for a change, Hermione and Ron's reactions are very believable. In many stories they're either dead-set against the idea of Snape andry ory or blissfully happy for them or too wrapped up in each other to notice/care, but here, they are concerned and maybe Hone one is a little pleased that Harry is feeling better about himself and good about Snape in general.

I don't like Blaise. I have no idea why. I really hope he doesn't cause trouble for Snape or Harry. And I hope Voldemort doesn't cause any (more) trouble, either.

Loved the scene between Harry and Severus. I like Severus' control. It's much better that they get to really know each other not just jump into bed with all the complications still attached.

Can't wait to see what trouble Blaise is going to try and stir up.