rate_review Reviews

Wow. Great Chapter. I love this story and I can't wait for more. I was just re-reading chapter 1 last night and this morning there's chapter 7! It made my morning. Keep it up!

Beth

so hot sooo hot

This is excellent! I love possessive Snape. Can't wait to see what evil things Blaise is planning

Mmm, lovely. Hot sex and a 'power the Dark Lord knows not'. The sensuousness, togetherness, and what Sev said to Harry was so true---He kept it to salient points, did not criticize excessively or hold the anger overlong---though, Harry's timely kissing sure did help a lot!

I am enjoying your story very much. I like the use of inner voice, it adds so much to the character and you do a great job of conveying their thoughts. This story is unfolding nicely and I am anxious to see where it goes. Your "smutty scenes" are done very well. l look forward to more to develop between them there too. As for keeping them in bed, I am OK with that, look at it this way, Sev's barriers are really down then. What fun to be had. Seriously, I am looking forward to how Harry's abilities will play out in the story too. I like Ron's reaction, some stories have him freaking out way too much and it is distracting. His acceptance and concern are much more beleivable. Looking forward to more and I also appreciate that yost tst to the group your updates. I have a lousy time keeping up with story updates here. Great job!!

very nice.

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Yeah this is a lame review, but I hate not leaving one at all. I loved their interaction and Draco has me reeling with the possibilities of what he truely knows.

"Did I just think 'Yummy'?":

This story is wonderful. I love it. ~S~ I hope to see the next chapter soon.

w00t! I'm so glad that you updated! I was nearly desolate with no update from one of my favorite writers *~*. You've done fantastically on yet another chapter, and I hope you get #7 up soon!

Please update soon! I keep returning to this story because of the wonderful characterization and awesome plot ^^. You've done so well with every chapter so far, and I'm sure the next chapter will be no less of an interesting read.

Uhm, yeah.
You write hot sex, very well!
Of course, I had to read it over 3 times. Just to be sure. ;-)
Lovers. Happiness. And Severus inner Slytherin is fun! No guilt, just satisfaction at claiming what is his. Or, rather, who. And Harry just as happy, in his own innocent, whole hearted way.
I'm Still smiling, Great sex, And a plot that I adore! What more can one ask for?
I know! More soon?