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for To Have and To Hold

by MontanaDan

person Constance
schedule November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I've left a review for this story yet....hm. Anyway, I've been loving it and I just wanted to let you know that I've just been eating it up, especially your Snape characterization - it's quite perfect and sweet. And I always enjoy fics where Harry must endure pain and suffering and Snape wants to help him. Your story and Flawed Lines by diaganolist are the only two Snarries that I've truly taken to so far. To sum this rather long winded babble up - please, please, please update again! (and please don't tell me that you have abandoned this!). Keep up the brilliant work and I hope to see more soon.
person Ruth
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im realli enjoying this story, but i have to say that its very hard to read. There are a lot of spelling mistakes and there seem to be lines/paragraphs missing. the second chapter appers to be a cross-post from another story.
i cant wait for the next chapter, and i thinki wold be a good idea to re-read over the whole story and repost the bits that ahve obviously gone wrong somehow.
XxX
person Ruth
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im realli enjoying this story, but i have to say that its very hard to read. There are a lot of spelling mistakes and there seem to be lines/paragraphs missing. the second chapter appers to be a cross-post from another story.
i cant wait for the next chapter, and i think it would be a good idea to re-read over the whole story and repost the bits that ahve obviously gone wrong somehow.
XxX
person Ruth
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im realli enjoying this story, but i have to say that its very hard to read. There are a lot of spelling mistakes and there seem to be lines/paragraphs missing. the second chapter appers to be a cross-post from another story.
i cant wait for the next chapter, and i think it would be a good idea to re-read over the whole story and repost the bits that ahve obviously gone wrong somehow.
XxX
person abraxis
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still beautifully hot and heavy! Severus and his inner snark still blowing me away.

I am waiting anxiously to see what they do to save Draco. If they don't revert to Harry's previous plan I can't imagine what you'll surprise me with.

Loving it, loving it. More, please, soon.
person Weirkat
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I do so love this story. ~Grins~ You're doing a wonderful flow over the story, and keep my interest.
person cdkobasiuk
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still realy great chapters. I wonder what will happen with the Malfoys next?

cdk
person Manx
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Where did you get the idea that there was no such thing as a black panther!?!? Most panthers ARE black!! Maybe you sh hav have said a black lion---now that is unheard of.
person leeroy
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love them. love this. great chapter, great blowjob..made me wriggle in my chair. *shiver* yum I also enjoy when severus says things like harry not being able to remember his name when he wants him to beg. love your sev. *snort* and him thinking back to the last time he used his shampoo. David? ha!
person manx
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I didn't want you to think that I only had criticism. Along with. apparently, everyone else on Earth, I think this story is awesome! I sooooo love Sev's inner voice. I'm glad they didn't jump into sex right away, because all those kissing scenes are so hot!!