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for To Have and To Hold

by MontanaDan

person hen
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m hooked. Splendid story, fairly good pace, very few mechanical errors. Can\'t wait to see what happens next. I do love Snape\'s insecure and horny inner voice. Or is it voices? That deliciously traitorous inner voice that chooses truth over convention.... Marvelous Snape. Good work.
person GreenPanther
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FUCKING BITCH, I SHOULD KILL YOU!!! update soon please, lovely story. ^.~
person abbey
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. I love it. Please update asap.

abbey
person Scar
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you write Snape and Harry! Don't take forever to update! You'll kill me.
person Papaya
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really look forward to the next chapter! I think you\'re doing a wonderful job. How long is it going to take for Severus to realize that Harry didn\'t go with Blaise? How long will it take for their relationship to heal from the misunderstanding? And how long is it going to take Severus to get over the fact that he wasn\'t able to help Harry? Please update soon!
person eve/roarke
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know how I\'ve missed this fanfic, just read all eight chapters, I really like it the charecters are supberb.
update soon please will be watching out.
5 stars that good.
person Kalena
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I love it!!! keep writing!!!
person Sakya
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God! What a mess! What happend with the 2nd chapter? Xander and spike? and there were missing parts in others too... but that is new, when I read for the first time a while ago everything was ok, at least as far as I can remember (I would remember a whole chapter from a Buffyverse story). What happened?

Well, besides that, the story is going great, can wait for the rest. Can it be soon? Pleeeeease?
person Anon
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant as usual, but... well... there were a few times when your coding was a little squ-wif (cockeyed!). Some words were merged together and occaionally things like this would appear \'quotquot\'. You may have to go through this chapter and just sort those little bits out at some point
person countessvorkosigan
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just read the first chapter of THTH and it\'s amazing. Well-written, great characterizations, sensual...can\'t wait to read the rest of it! Thanks for sharing it-it\'s great, *especially* for a first fic.