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for To Have and To Hold

by MontanaDan

person ghellie
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when i started reading this fic it was 3:14 am my time. i was sent to bed after the third chapter and i snuck back to the puter an hr later just so i could finish what youve written so far. give you an idea how good i think it is?! fucking awsome. its good because there are so many ways this story could go that you can never predict the next bit, there\'s a good balance of magic, plot, sex and humor whcih makes this great.

what it all boils down to is i refuse to sleep again until you ahve finished it. hell, i\'l prolly stay online till you do!

on another note, i have a small request that could be good for your story... can we have snape \"tucking\" harry into bed in the gryff tower? just an idea that may have te potential of being funny... especially if hermione accidentally finds them...

cheers mate!

ghellie
person Kateri
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, so well written and the characters are very human. Not to mention all the slytherins are acting deliciously slytherin. Very eager for more
person Abraxis
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, shit, shit, shit. Somebody just throw Blaize off of the astronomy tower, please.

I really want to see Severus, Harry and both Malfoys get out of this with relatively whole skins and that little bastard can so screw it up.

More, please. Soon, please.
person eve/roarke
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! this fanfic just gets better and better, the way you portray Blaize is exactly how I see him,
always lurking around, very quiet and sneeky, please don\'t let him muck up Severus and Harry.
Brilliant writing, thank you Montana.
person Ruth
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oohhhh......that sounded realli ominous.. :(
cant wait for the next chapter, will Harry n Draco have their talk??
post more soon!!
XxX
person Moi
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is not looking good for Harry. Rotten little hormone named Blaise.

Riveting story, great sex scene (damn!), nothing to complain about in the way of grammatical or mechanical error. Can\'t wait to see what\'s next.
person nia
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So glad you updated. Uh oh. The suspense in this story is almost killing me. When is Blaise going to acto n his nefarious scheme? How will it impact Snape and Harry> POst soon!
person ChiChi
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful Chap. love the story, you\'re awsome! ^_^
person Cattatra
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O wow o wow o wow o wow o wow o wow o wow!!! cool 1st chapter, im like ooooo! from it already! more please:D
person Cattatra
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooo i bet harry isnt going to be pleased about being \'babied\' lol:D ONWARD!!