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just thought that id review a bit more after reading everyone else's giving such emotional reviews. i will say that i looked up every song that you had mentioned and listened to them. this was so emotional and you had me on wits end the entire time. i loved the 'baby' and all of the 'i love you' and that final night with harry in chap 29/30 and just everything about fic was so memorable. and for those of you who think it is done try checking on the end of chapter 2 3 or 4 she lists her site. thats where ive been for the past few weeks. i wake in the morn read it afternoon i read it. finally i finished it and i love the whole "o soft what light through yonder breaks" and the lucius and everything i loved your fic. and i loved mark too a little and i noticed you never mentioned him and what happened but we can safely guess. i just adored this fic so much i cannot begin to express in words what i feel. you are trult amazing and keep writing more. i am at your site constantly and plan to start a new fic there soon.

smoldering within - Great story, great plot, I adored it. It was only very few times it seemed a bit wordy, but with a novel length fic that's nothing! I liked the humour and witty responses everyone seemed to have. The lemons (I didn't really read anything beside Harry/Draco ^^) were excellent. I think I found only one mistake:
"That was the closest yet, Albus," the mediwizard said.
-> but didn't you write that after each suicide attempt, the mediwizards were obliviated? I'm not totally sure, but I think so ;P
And maybe Pansy's transformation was a bit difficult to follow. I thought she loved Draco not Aaron *scratch head*
Great, again, the next I'm reading will be 'Once Again'
wri write as soon as I'm finished
MajinSakuko
Once Again: It is a bit wordy, the conversations (it seems as if that everything that happens is going to be told at least twice to all people around) are a bit too much for me and I scroll down a lot. I think I liked this story better than the last I read ^^

Amazing. I loved the first few chapters and saw the note on Chapeter 3 of the complete story and found it.

I loved your development Harry and his first relationships and his involvement with his his friends.
I do not want to give anything away from those who have not read it but I found that I laughed and was excited with the danger and adventure of what Harry has to go through. I found that I wept and understood the anguish your characters had gone through.

It is an amazing story and I am already working reading some of the other HP/DM novel length Fic's you have done allowing myself to enjoy the amazing writer you are and the story you have told. Thank you for the great story.

Thank you always
Alexi

Two things....

One, you seem to be missing a chapter. Chapter 4 to be precise.

Two, you lied!! You said this was complete, but it's not! Now, I'm frustrated about not knowing what's happened.

Please say you have another chapter somewhere that I didn't see. Or something, anything!!

Help me out here.

I hope to hear something, i.e. read the next wonderful chapter soon.

Sincerely,
Michelle W.

this story is amazing!!!!!! I just wanted you to know that this is the best story I have ever read. Your style is proffessional and light; your characters are beautifully developed. It has a sense of unity, with nothing being out of bounds. Perfect! However, I am confused on one point. What did you mean by COMPLETE in the summary. Is it finished for real? If it is, then I am about to cry, as I want this story to go on forever. Plus, it didn'em fem finished to me in the last chapter. But if it is, so be it. Please send me a site with more of your stories. I really want to read more of your writi Tha Thank you!!!!!!!!!

WOW! I swear, it's uncanny, I can associate with Harry nearly 100 %, safe only the famous part *LOL* I adore your story and I had so much fun reading it! It was greaun bun but also sad in the right parts! Even the part with the books Harry bought was a bit familiar. I (I'm female) bought "The Joy of Gay Sex" *LOL* in a bookshop ("Lionheart" *LOL*) specialised on gay and lesbian books and videos. The book helps a lot when I'm writing Slash ^^

Oh, thank you! I adore this story. I wasn't satisfied with three chapters, so I've started reading it on your site! It makes me laugh, makes me cry, makes me hot!! The best of all worlds. I look forward to reading your other fics too.

One question--I can't get all of chapter 14 to load! Is there somewhere else to read it? After starting chapter 15, I realized I missed some important stuff! *pouts* Please help!!

OMG!!! You need to update as soon as possible!!!! I love your story so much! And Mark sucks... hes a nice guy and all .. but Harry and Draco NEED to be together.. lol. But really I am loving your story!! oh and I love Harry and the leather pants.. Draco has to see him in those... I would love to see Draco's reaction! Please update soon!! Oh and If you would be so kind as to email me when you do that would be so aesome of you .. if you dont have the time or just dont feel like it then thats cool to, Ill keep my eye out. Again, I love the story!

This story ranks right up there with the other story you wrote "Summer of Wisdom". This is one of the best stories I have ever read, so detailed, I cried and laughed. Keep up the good work.

Well first after reading first part or chapter I was really desapointed about the whole "non-draco-but markFlirting" thing then I saw the second chapter andyou know whit curiosity and all...
so I read it and I feel better but still don't like little Mark here makes me don't want to red the story anymore but Ilove your Harry Shy Potter ...
Hope you post soon though.
ps: the sex scene are good.And please no Hoffman-Potter sex.Love ya