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December 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this. Its so realistic. I love how harry is experimenting with himself ro come to terms with it. I love his relationship with tonks. It reminds me of my own best friend. I like that harry is powerful and that you actuall go into detail about it. I also love that harry is a hunk and how organized he is bit also likes to be bold and wear leather sometimes.
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December 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think theres a mess up with chapter 3. There is a lot missing between the rn and chapter 4. There isnt even any cherries and bathroom stalls.
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
umm...issit me..or does the last chapter goes a bit sweatdropping.. why are there japanese names in harry/draco fics?? n...i still dont see harry/draco slash around... is he gonna confess any sooner or what???? *blur*
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow amazing story so far but your third and fourth chapters are having some problems. In the third one a hell of a lot was cut out, the fourth one wasnt put into paragraph form and it also skips around, and ends off with Inuyasha, I dont know if you know this but I thought id inform you. Otherwiose the first two chapters have been amazing keep it up!
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is good so far, but why did the chapter end so suddenly? i really want to read the rest of this, and i cant even open your homepage.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories. Anyway i was recently trying to get on your website and it wasn't there. Is there any other place where i can read your stories?
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okaaaaaaay, what in the bloody hell happened??? I was all for it, it was going great, good characterizations, working dialong, and section four just pulled a Douglas Adams and hitchhiked into the Twilight Zone! Hopefully you can retrieve the storyline and get it going smoothly again, but I'm lost for now.
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hei!!
I really like your story. and harry is really adoreble in it. But it seems like sometimes in the middle of the story things er missing. in chapter 4 you hear about the trip to the movie and harry telling them he was gay. but the whole stro isent there? ANd again in chapter 4 suddenly you er writting about harry and ginny in a forest whit some elves, what is that about??
hope yoy finis it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really like your story. and harry is really adoreble in it. But it seems like sometimes in the middle of the story things er missing. in chapter 4 you hear about the trip to the movie and harry telling them he was gay. but the whole stro isent there? ANd again in chapter 4 suddenly you er writting about harry and ginny in a forest whit some elves, what is that about??
hope yoy finis it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once Again
I kind of liked the plot, great parts of it, actually. What I didn't like was more and more parts of your style, sorry. Every time I would read the 'Love me, I was an orphan' parts followed by 'An orphan with four parents' or the dreaded 'Figure that out' it would make me bristle. It was honestly getting on my nerves. I developed an antipathy against the word 'tease' which was used way too often in your fic. How often can you use the 'You're so weird, odd, strange, whatever' in one chapter?
I liked the conversations between Draco and Harr ver very much, especially how Draco was so keen on getting pregnant, it was so sweet. This is a thing you can write about quite a few times during a fic, but every tiny bit of new information (Harry being Aisas, having this other f bei being this Marvesva, Draco getting Aisas as well, Harry and Draco not getting a bavihettah...) was always repeated to every known (and new introduced) person, and it was just plain boring. Great parts I had to just skip and scroll down because it was nothing more than blah-blah for me. I'm sorry if this just sounds like I'm trying to flame you badly, but I don't just give reviews that say 'I love it,' because I didn't love this one, so I tell you my honest opinion. There was too much talk, and even if it's nice to be able to say you've got a novel-length story (or ten), you could cut half of the story out and it would be better. The most irritating and tiresome thing was that every time something happened (i.e.: Harry taking a shower to get rid of the sweat, some new word, anything ...) someone would ask the question (i.e.: "Why did you have him take a shower?") and then someone else would explain it. That is absolutely unnecessary! 1. Your er *er *knows* that, because you've at least explained it twice already. 2. Even if we didn't know it, you've got to let us know some other way. This is like reading some kind of information surplus. Everything is like Question, Answer, Question, Answer, and that is dull.
I liked the MPreg parts, I'm a fan of that, and the sexual experiments were nice, but kind of reminded of your other fics.
I enjoyed the scene where Harry teased Snape very much, though Sev was very little seen *pout*
I kind of liked the plot, great parts of it, actually. What I didn't like was more and more parts of your style, sorry. Every time I would read the 'Love me, I was an orphan' parts followed by 'An orphan with four parents' or the dreaded 'Figure that out' it would make me bristle. It was honestly getting on my nerves. I developed an antipathy against the word 'tease' which was used way too often in your fic. How often can you use the 'You're so weird, odd, strange, whatever' in one chapter?
I liked the conversations between Draco and Harr ver very much, especially how Draco was so keen on getting pregnant, it was so sweet. This is a thing you can write about quite a few times during a fic, but every tiny bit of new information (Harry being Aisas, having this other f bei being this Marvesva, Draco getting Aisas as well, Harry and Draco not getting a bavihettah...) was always repeated to every known (and new introduced) person, and it was just plain boring. Great parts I had to just skip and scroll down because it was nothing more than blah-blah for me. I'm sorry if this just sounds like I'm trying to flame you badly, but I don't just give reviews that say 'I love it,' because I didn't love this one, so I tell you my honest opinion. There was too much talk, and even if it's nice to be able to say you've got a novel-length story (or ten), you could cut half of the story out and it would be better. The most irritating and tiresome thing was that every time something happened (i.e.: Harry taking a shower to get rid of the sweat, some new word, anything ...) someone would ask the question (i.e.: "Why did you have him take a shower?") and then someone else would explain it. That is absolutely unnecessary! 1. Your er *er *knows* that, because you've at least explained it twice already. 2. Even if we didn't know it, you've got to let us know some other way. This is like reading some kind of information surplus. Everything is like Question, Answer, Question, Answer, and that is dull.
I liked the MPreg parts, I'm a fan of that, and the sexual experiments were nice, but kind of reminded of your other fics.
I enjoyed the scene where Harry teased Snape very much, though Sev was very little seen *pout*
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September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey! well a few weeks ago i went to your site and for awhile forgot all about the other sites. i stayed there and am proud to say i just finished it FINALLY last night around 1 in the morn. all 30 CHAPTERS! omg wonderful. I keep pushing my cousin to read it and she says she is in October. I plan to read your other fics as well. It is by far the best I have read. No question asked. Great Job. Love your site.