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for Not A Virgin

by PotionsMistressM

person Anna
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm nice, I'm really nice, everyone says so! MORE SMUT, DETENTION, YAY! one, monday all I consumed was a quick slice a pizza at lunch and copious amounts of beer, so I understand the suffering, sat througha few classes willing my self to not puke. two, and the most important point, I may be a freak but detention fantasies are HOT. PLEASE WRITE MORE.........PLEASE!!!!!
person Rosie
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Try something from Snape's point of view
person GrrArrg
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woo Hoo!!!!

Thank you baby, that was awesome!!

Loved:

'Not dirty in the two R's, Christina Aguilera way.'
'Daydream Action Figure Snape'

And the smut was cool too!!

Detention Please!!

Kisses
Grr
person sharon
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really good, funny in unexpected ways. Keep going!
person ancientgirl
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, very very nice! Is this a one shot though? It works well as one but a couple more chapters woudn't hurt either. I'm wondering though if Hermione should get mad at Harry and Ron for purposly plotting to get her drunk, but then again, if she haden't she would not have done the song and dance and gotten such wonderful treatment from our favorite Potions Master.
person anon
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn... That was hot. It would definitely be nice to see a bit more....
person nesscafe
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now that's what I call good old fashioned down and dirty smut! You GO! I do hope you'll be adding some detention scenes to this! PLEASE!!!!!