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for That Which Makes Us Breaks Us

by creativeagony

person Shattered Dreams
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You do know that Ginny's real name is Virginia, right? I'll just assume that it's part of your plot bunny or something.
person Shattered Dreams
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You do know that Ginny's real name is Virginia, right? I'll just assume that it's part of your plot bunny or something.
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I agree with what auntbecky said...It's a good story but you need to not have so many author notes.
person oldwolf
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uh, Chum, there's nothing but the disclaimer in chap 2 and 3.
person auntbecky
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This has the potential to be a really good story, but you need to have more story and less author notes.