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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo, love this fic. To bad Severus was able to rein her in. LOL I would have loved to see her toast that, as you say, oily little bastard. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love your story, I can't really give you any constructive critizism, it's perfect as it is... My guess would be, that the pendant somehow linked Hermione and Severus including their powers. Some kind of deep bonding... Rancine is horrible. And I really hope that that new fellow Michael what's-his-name won't try to seperate Hermione and Severus, hate those people!!
The last update was really quick, are the other ones likely to be as quick as well?!?! Please.... =)
The last update was really quick, are the other ones likely to be as quick as well?!?! Please.... =)
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it love it love it.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful fic. I haven't even gotten close to finishing what is posted yet but already I love it. A lot of stories I've read online are poorly written and thought out and they're more of a mockery of a real story. Yours is one of the few I will continue to read in what little spare time I have.
I just have a few points to bring up. I promise they're all technical!
There are several spots in each of the chapters I've read where there seems to be a glitch or something and several words seem to be lost. This has the tendency of throwing me out of the flow of the story as I try to figure out what the sentence is supposed to say.
I also noticed in Chapter 7 you wrote
"Actually, Miss Granger, your theory on the Wolfsbane Potion may bare looking into."
I think you meant to use the word "bear"
bare = nekkid
bear (as a verb) = apply or pertain (reference - Miriam-Webster's online dictionary at m-w.com)
I don't mean to be an ass; I just noticed and thought you might want to know. Please don't dismember me!
In other news this really is an enjoyable fic with a really good mix of drama (is he going to go for her?), humor (thank you SO much for introducing The Thong like you did!), angst (Snape ripping himself apart like he does) and lots of learning (Who knew there was a website that described how to tango!).
Incidentally, I happen to be a November Scorpio and am immensely pleased you decided to put your version of Snape in the same sign. Yes we really are like that. I think that's why I like your Snape so much. I really identify with him. You do an excellent job with making your characters real to your readers.
Sorry this is way too long. Thanks again for the great story!
J
I just have a few points to bring up. I promise they're all technical!
There are several spots in each of the chapters I've read where there seems to be a glitch or something and several words seem to be lost. This has the tendency of throwing me out of the flow of the story as I try to figure out what the sentence is supposed to say.
I also noticed in Chapter 7 you wrote
"Actually, Miss Granger, your theory on the Wolfsbane Potion may bare looking into."
I think you meant to use the word "bear"
bare = nekkid
bear (as a verb) = apply or pertain (reference - Miriam-Webster's online dictionary at m-w.com)
I don't mean to be an ass; I just noticed and thought you might want to know. Please don't dismember me!
In other news this really is an enjoyable fic with a really good mix of drama (is he going to go for her?), humor (thank you SO much for introducing The Thong like you did!), angst (Snape ripping himself apart like he does) and lots of learning (Who knew there was a website that described how to tango!).
Incidentally, I happen to be a November Scorpio and am immensely pleased you decided to put your version of Snape in the same sign. Yes we really are like that. I think that's why I like your Snape so much. I really identify with him. You do an excellent job with making your characters real to your readers.
Sorry this is way too long. Thanks again for the great story!
J
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome update.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter my dear! Love the "Jungle Room".*grins*
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo, thank you Pearle. Made my weekend with the update. Glad RL has let you get some writing in. Hoping you feel up to another chapter soon.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story..very entertaining
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 39 I love the way you are letting this story continue on. You've spent so much time adapting the characters to your plot that it would be a shame to have to rebuild them in another story. I like the idea of many more chapters to come.
Steven, sniff, smarmy little character, isn't he? One down and hundreds to go, indeed! Hermione showed discriminating taste at not going to bed with him.
The room sounds interesting, not my cuppa, but interesting. I wonder if they'll use the waterfall.
Thanks for the new chapter. I'm always excited to read a new installment to your work.
Steven, sniff, smarmy little character, isn't he? One down and hundreds to go, indeed! Hermione showed discriminating taste at not going to bed with him.
The room sounds interesting, not my cuppa, but interesting. I wonder if they'll use the waterfall.
Thanks for the new chapter. I'm always excited to read a new installment to your work.
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Regarding Chapter 12:
Pearle,
I don't remember where, but Severus's birthday is listed as January 9th.
Just thought you'd want to know.
Pearle,
I don't remember where, but Severus's birthday is listed as January 9th.
Just thought you'd want to know.