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August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this is going to be a very good story. It is an unusual idea for getting the two of them together. I will be watching for updates. Hopefully more soon?
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August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When I first saw the challenge at WIKTT I didn't know what to make of it, it sounded odd. Yet you've done a lovely and in-character story here. I loved the part with Severus hitting the bottle and thinking about snakes! I look forward eagerly to the rest.
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August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuo are doing such a great job! Can't wait for chapter 3!!
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August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its cute. Looking foward to more!!
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more chapters. Very good, as usual.
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like it is going to be wonderfully cute! Do you have a beta? There are a few gramatical errors as well spelling errors. Nothing major and it is not a critism. We artists get to writing and all else become secondary. hehe Pleasep wep writing and take care! Can't wait to see chapter two!
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Let it never be said that you don't write a first-rate story, Pearle! This looks to be another fascinating read. I can't wait to see where you go with it.
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am soooo loving this!! There is almost no other dance in the world more sensual and sexy than the Tango!! Fabulous start! I can't wait to read chapter two!!!!