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for Dances With Witches

by Pearle

person pinky
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pearle! I love this. Omg I just love this story. And he sounded so damn sexy in that outfit. Even though i\'m not one to think tights on a man is sexy he would be able to pull it off. So would Lucius. Anyhow, yay you updated!! I can\'t wait for more.
person Your Worshipfulness
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous, fabulous, fabulous. As always, I love your story and your take on the characters. I even love the title. I just cannot wait until the next chapter is posted! Please please PLEASE update as soon as possible. *is on pins and needles*

~Your Worshipfulness
person Cathy N
schedule November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still loving it.......looking forward to reading more.
person SusanPW
schedule November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is great and well-plotted. On a personal level, I'm finding these chapters very hard to read because my exhusband tried to commit suicide twice. You sum up the guilt and unhappiness of the other parties very well. I also had a stage where I went into anger at him for being so stupid and for screwing up my life so much. If Severus has to babysit his student for too long I'll bet he'll get resentful like I did.
For personal reasons I hope that this theme will not continue for much longer. On the other hand, it's an effective way of getting Snape to look at his own guilts and problems and a change from the usual plots. It lets Snape be introspective and reflective and deal with some of his own demons.

And this is a gold star chapter; I didn't notice any typos!! Did you have a lot of coffee before you starting posting? :) (j/k)
person Avanell
schedule November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH, can't WAIT for the next coming chapters...especially the b-day tango for two. LOVE IT!!!
person LadyWraith
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I just wanted to say how much I am enjoying your story. This one has me hooked! I look forward to every update and actually get excited when you post on the Darksarcasm board. I like your writing style and the pace of your story. It's not too slow and not too fast. Keep up the good work.

:-)
person Avanell
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, cannot WAIT for THAT scene :) thanks for the preview. also, I meant to say that the other night I was REreading this story. Goodness, they are so ome ome together here.
person Jill
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was nice i do hope you update soon.
person avanell
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this is weird...at least the second time I've been reading a story overfor for an update late at night and POOF! a new chapter! Thank you thank you thank you!!! LOVE this story, especially since I'm a dancer, too...okay, just on the side but at least my foundation was built with SF Ballet :) LOVE your tango descriptions. And of course, our fav duo...hot hot hot! I keep imagining harry and ron's reaction...
person cearrae27
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm addicted - update again soon. Not much from Harry and Ron in the story - are they coming in later? I think Snape could be a bit snarkier in parts but otherwise great!