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for Dances With Witches

by Pearle

person Tiffany
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AllI have to say is \"WOW\". This story had me hooked from the first sentence. I love how the relationship started from a bet that the professor lost. I have been on a Hermione/Snape pairing for quite a while, and i have to say that i cannot wait until you update your story. you have found yourself a fan!
person eve/roarke
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is like good wine, it just gets better with every chapter, no smut, just pure tenderness
and caring. Your portrayal of Severus, ill, slightly weak yet still proud, was beautiful and Hermione
so worried and concerned. Brilliant writing.

Please update soon, from a reader with two left feet.
person Halric
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This really is an amazing story brilliant. Though I do think \'meddling Mini; should keep her whiskers out of it. Hermione is an adult and should be able to make up her own mind. can\'t wait for the thong scene hope that will be part of his birthday present.
person pinky
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. I loved how the boy fired Hermiones temper by going on and on about Snape then Severus. *g* Great job. Can\'t wait for more.
person Rhiannon
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story.
I am truly enjoying type of relationship Severus and Hermione are finding in this story.
person SP777
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*laughing*

WHEN is Severus going to see the \'\'thong-tha-thong-thong-THONG\'\'??? *just to let you know that IS a song.*
Lord knows his subconcious is anxious!

...and WHEN is this dance??? I\'m anxious my darn self, I want to \'see\' Snape blow \'em out the water.
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speaking of dances, I wish they would show \'Dance Competitions\' on TV again, that way I\'d have MORE of a mental picture of the Tango, which is limited.
person SP777
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How wonderful to find this here...I don\'t know about you, but to me, this is the one place you can truly \'let go\' & write freely the way a story should go...without restrictions.
person Threedaystar
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. It is so much fun !
person SusanPW
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just love this line: \"Severus thought green was a good color for Weasley. Made him look almost festive. It was a shame Christmas was so far off.\"
It\'s the throw-away \"shame Christmas was so far off\" that made it perfect.

I also like all the voices in Severus\' head. I find the alternation of the passionate Severus in private with the snarky public one to be very believable. I don\'t think Severus could suddenly turn cuddly and mushy.

Keep the chapters coming please!
person Emily
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoynig this story, the plot development is wonderful and the very steamy sex is icing on the cake