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for Dances With Witches

by Pearle

person Susa
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweety
Do us alle a favor an continue
person Anon
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person J
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loving it, loving it, loving it. PLease update soon.
person firewall
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pearle, I'm going through serious withdrawal right now. I desperately need a new chapter. Pleeeaaase!
person Rosebery
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love reading your story, you are such a brilliant author. Please, update this story soon, I have to know how it ends.
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're so knowledgable with all of your dance research. Unfortunately from me if I read instructions they seem to go over my mind.;-; Oh well at least they seem to sink in for you - since you write the dancing so well! =D
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hermoine in a coma?!?! At least you didn't drag it out for lots of chapters making your readers squirm. It turned out cute in the end. All of the "I love you's." and such.
For some reason for Hermiones studying under a potions master I keep thinking "Why don't they marry so that studying under Severus wouldn't be such a 'bad' thing?"
But I'm pretty sure you've got it all worked out. =3
Thanks for a nice chapter.
person Queen Celestia
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hope your tests and surgery went well, but I'm assuming they have since I still have a lot of chapters to go through. :3 Hope you don't mind me actually using the whole Dark Magic binding technique - I thought it was fab. I used it in my story on here "The Morning After" if you're curious on how I used it [and abused it. ;D]
Thanks for a lovely story. :3
person Queen Celestia
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa random exciting attack to Severus! :O
person Queen Celestia
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry had to stop midchapter to say I loved "Friday was Hermione's birthday. He wanted to buy something special for the young woman. Something that said: I-care-deeply-for-you-but-have-a-difficult-time-communicating-to-you-these-emotions-so-please-accept-this-whatever-as-a-token-of-my-esteem-and-understand-I-will-try-to-express-my-feelings-at-sometime-in-the-future-if-at-all-possible."

So much. I might steal it for my own story. Or something. Ahaha. I love this chapter. <3