rate_review Reviews

Great start, I can't wait for part 2! I love stories that have Pansy dominating Hermione.

good so far
please update

Keep Going!! it's good, keep it up!

A very good story so far, I would like very much to see it continued

well, you left off at a good place to make us readers come back. It\'s interesting the way things are progressing and with the promise of BDSM in your story info line the rest should be quiet interesting if not just plain amazing.

feel free to take your time and add detail tho. detail makes your reader be there in the moment and helps personalize. what you have so far is great, just keep in mind longer isn\'t bad either.:) You seem to have the personalities going well too. all in all you got it great, now make it sparkeling.:) make it magic. (haha i made a funny.) ;P

are you ever going to continue the rest of this story? gaah

hi!!! just want to tell that you should update soon...please...this story is great and i can\'t wait any longer so please....update sooner...within this week??? sorry for being this demanding but really, please update soon... thanks!

see you sooner...

-mysterious

dude hurry up and make the second chapter thats awsome

This is good... I'm quite intriqued. Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next!
- Kayla

NOOOOO Update now!!!!!