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March 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good start, and of course I will insist you make this smutty as hell, lol! Convince me they\'re sexy!
PS: try not to hurt Sirius (you know me)
PS: try not to hurt Sirius (you know me)
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March 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I thought the story was very well constructed. As always, Draco was interesting and added the right amount of titillation. May I sugest that you don\'t add smut just to add it, but make the intensity of your story flow as well as it does in this first chapter. If smut happens, it happens!
Looking forward to more chapters,
RavenSparks
Looking forward to more chapters,
RavenSparks
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March 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow - I loved this. Loved the pairing, loved the characterization of Cho.
I particularly liked the way you handled what Cho heard at the doorway.
Just how would that snippet sound if someone overheard it out of context.
As for smut, well, the more smut the merrier I always say. Cho/Draco is a
unique pairing and would be pretty just to read about :-)
Great job. Loved the title, too!
I particularly liked the way you handled what Cho heard at the doorway.
Just how would that snippet sound if someone overheard it out of context.
As for smut, well, the more smut the merrier I always say. Cho/Draco is a
unique pairing and would be pretty just to read about :-)
Great job. Loved the title, too!