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by ridxwan

person wwf
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
can you remove style='mso-ansi-language:EN-GB'>- so you can read the story with out style='mso-ansi-language:EN-GB'>- getting in the way of it please.
person 1
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good shit, post more!
person Creepy Susie
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo
i like this
hope you post this on portkey
it's a pain to review on aff.net
kudos
love the story
love H/Hr
~Creepy Susie
person steph
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
are you out of your damn mind? the maremiremise is kind of sexy, but your sense of wording is just freakin retarded. let me poing out, "is that an invitation to fellate you?" and the ever popular," expect a huge load." Do you even read what you are writing? honestly, i know it's smut, but maybe put just a little thought into it
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There should be more fics like this.