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for Manners

by LucyScarpetta2003

person killerthecat
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo! you must update now! *pouts and cries* I need to know what happens next. *sighs* okay I will try to be patiant. Loving this fic!
person Akiyhrah
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHH! I'm really enjoying your story! I hope you update soon!!
person pureblood_princess
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!! luv da way draco is obsessed with harry. totally adorable! ^^
Plz update soon, coz i don't think i can handle a cliffie like that, lol!
person kwalagrrl
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey. Great storey, and I love obsessed Draco. but can ron be nice when he sees them togethor? just for a change. I'm kinda sick of storeys where Ron is mean.
person MajinSakuko
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The only thing I don't like here is, that you keep on writing from both point of views, and everything at that. At first,co wco wants to know where Harry was and why he was too late. And this chapter, you write it again. Maybe it would be better to do it a bit differently, for example: begin with the scene where Harry runs out of the library and then let him think why Draco kissed him and later a bit, that something reminds Harry of Grawp and that he remembers that he promised to visit him again soon, you know? The way you use to write some scenes doubly is actually a bit (sorry for my bluntness) boring.
Why didn't Draco think earlier about getting drunk? *LOL* That would have saved him a lot of time.
I can't wait to see how Ron will react! *LOL* Or Harry or Snape *ROFL*
person Mystique
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oww, come on darling, continue your story, I would love to read it again and again and again.......
person MajinSakuko
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What I missed was how Draco told (especially Snape) about being in love with Harry. I can really imagine how Sev would have ticked off *LOL*
Draco in love, acting like a complete fool *sigh* Very, very sweet, did I mention, that I find him sweet?
person R
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! I'm excited to see Harry's reaction when he finds out Draco slept in his bed with him! Keep up the awesome work and PLEASE update really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person WretchedScar
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story! It's quite good! Keep it up and update soon!

Cheers,
Wretched.
person caroll
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww !!!
Moooore please mooore!