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for Manners

by LucyScarpetta2003

person dido
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have a good story. However, please, please, please proof read! Typos like these are simple to fix if you or someone else proof reads: \"Harry
person Rachael
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story when I read it the first time, and I juast keep going back to it to read it again, hoping you are updating it. Update soon.
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Gods! This should be fun! I can\'t wait until chapter 6!
person Damaged
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting good. Please do finish.
person FlameArchanist
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*mails you another muse* Should be there in a couple working days!
person Heidi
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol i was reading your first chapter and you were talking about how draco watches harry eat and how he swallows before scooping up more... and i was eating my dinner and found i do the same... lol. Well on the 2nd chapter now, hope its as good as the first! also Just one tiny thing that always irks me.... is people say \"Zambini\" *scratches head* In the book it says \"Zabini\" but Don\'t worry, many other people do it, it just kinda gets to me lol. Pet peeve you could say... oh well LOVED IT SO FAR. Keep going, your on a roll
person sabrina
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you evil lady! hurry with the next chapter. great stroy!
person manx
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You hinted that Ron finds them? I\'m laughing and cringing at the same time at the thought of Harry waking up to find Draco curled over him, while Ron is (probably) having a temper tamtrum! Oh what fun!!!
person manx
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and for all those reviewers that think Harry\'s being an ass, WHAT do you expect?! How would YOU react if someone who made you and your friends absolutely miserable suddenly kissed you? You would most likely slug them in the mouth (or gut) and go wash out your mouth. All Harry did was walk away, and yes he would think it\'s some kind of joke.
person Blu
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwww!!
^_^
so cute and nice

PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!! ><

~Blu