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for Love To The Loveless Shown

by Sal

person ash
schedule August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
my song is love unknown,
my saviours love to me,
love to the loveless shown,
that they might lovely be,
oh who am i that for my sake my lord should take
frail flesh and die?

interesting use of the third line as a title.
person Em\\ tunclr4
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A truly amazing fic. I must say, i\'ve read some of your other work of almost equal brilliance, but i so far i think this is the best. As \'anon\' said, u truly do inspire great emotion through your writing and i hope you continue producing such quality fanfiction.
I liked the fact that you managed to work humour and emotion into the fic at the same time without going too OTT (over the top) on either, it gave it just the right touch. Also the contrast from the relatively carefree and forever memorable school days to Voldermort and the deatheater\'s reign of terror worked wonderfully. Also, a most brilliant ending.
Tres bien!
person Anon
schedule April 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really did love your story. I loved the soft, haunting style with which it was written which gave it a heavy quality and the same time, an almost airy theme to it, but an air that is laden with fog. you are a master at drawing certain emotions from the reader. I encourage you to continue writing. I must say again, this was an excellent piece of writing.
person Anon
schedule April 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really did love your story. I loved the soft, haunting style with which it was written which gave it a heavy quality and the same time, an almost airy theme to it, but an air that is laden with fog. you are a master at drawing certain emotions from the reader. I encourage you to continue writing. I must say again, this was an excellent piece of writing.
person Charlotte
schedule April 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Holy Mother..... soooooo good.... Seriously, this piece is one of the best writings that I have ever read, and I am stepping out of the bounds of fanfiction here. The eloquence and braiding of language and time.. it was incredible. No other way to say it. You have singlehandedly justified fanfiction.
person Pwanny
schedule October 18, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Sal, you are truly marvellous at writing. (I say obediently and meaning it too, so there)

Now post your MSTs! *bouncy*