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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1-2 - hilarious! He should\'ve tried to make the Tooth Fairy a healing potion, but with his luck, it might\'ve killed her for sure. Very funny look at poor Severus on his first Muggle airplane and Muggle restroom. More, please! Oh, and who supplies him with all the money to give the kids for their teeth? What will he do with all the teeth he picks up?
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update please! :)
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Too good! You must continue! SOON!
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a funny story, but you HAVE to separate your paragraphs. That goes for whenever you start a character to talking, it should always be considered a new paragraph. It makes the story ea to to read instead of being all bunched up.
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is cute but you make is sound like the European Wizards are country bumkins next to the Americans.
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is a crack-up. Severus peeing in the ladies room was a riot. Only one teeny weird complaint. The Tooth Fairy hit the oloth oth Fairy with her car and has been the Tooth Fairy for 200 years? Just a little time-line problem. LOL. Otherwise, writing and dialogue are really good and this promise be be loads of fun. Cannot wait to read the reaction to him in his nearly see-through costume. Oh the humanity!! Thanks and update soon :D