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August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story!! Keep up the good work! Update soon please.
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August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. I would recommend that you brush up on your spelling and grammar, and the story is moving along a bit fast, but apart from that it was pretty good. One minor point; Lucius Malfoy is older than Snape in the books, having been at school with Arthur Weasley.
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August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't have much time to write but I just wanted to let you know it was an excellent chapter. :)
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August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it :)