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for Every Heart

by Firestar

person Dassani
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woot! I can't wait to see more! I do suggest that you put something around your 'snake talk'. Like number signs or something so we know where it is without having to guest. Otherwise I luv it so far. I can't wait to see where you go with it! *^^*
Hugs&Serpents'Kisses ~Dassy
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, interesting! The first three chapters are good but a bit confusing but i can fill in the blanks on my own. The only concern i have is the whole HP/SS luv thing. They get together and then with a snap of the fingers Harry has to return to the future and all those years down the drain... Thankfully wizards have a habit for living two lives... 100 som odd years.
person lennnoxrose
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahh i loved it!!!! absolutely fantastic!!!! cant wait for more ;)
person Jademoon
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm gonna be rude and just say "MORE!!!" Cuz that's all I can think of at the moment
person Squall-sama(too lazy to log in)
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow--this amazing so far! I'd love to be able to read the Prologue when you get it finished. I love how this is turning out, iast ast paced but everything is explained well and nothing is confusing. Very good job! Please continue with it.
person Angie/les`
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update soon. I am enjoying this quite a bit.
person Umbra, Merlock. Lynn, &Co.
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I so totally love this, I have never read such a well written future Harry. Is there a before story to this with the founders, oohhh and I just can't wait to read what happens with Harry and Snape sleeping only feet apart (at seventeen!). Well can't wait for update, Ciao.
person Nova
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just love marauders era stories:) And this seems a nice one too:) Hopefully there will be more soon!:)
person killerthecat
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Excellent and intriguing plot. I do have one question however: If Harry had put the money in Gringotts in the future how is it that it is not only there in the past but has also accumulated interest? Great story, if you would be so kind to e-mail me when you update it, I would be forever in your debt. *winks* Cheers!
person aliciamasters
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this so far! Well done...can't wait for the next chapter! I love trips back in time. The prequel will be interesting, but it's flowing fine without it. The little note was enough. Thanks!