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February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful start.
Would love it if you were to continue writing this story.
Please update soon.
SM
Would love it if you were to continue writing this story.
Please update soon.
SM
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July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The story started lovely. It is good thus far you should update. thank you
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November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this please tell me you are still writing this if you have more of this story somewhere else please e-mail me so I may read it. Thank you
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story is well written and I am enjoying reading but I fail to see how this story is any different from Harry time travels, ends up in Slytherin, shot into the past by Voldie, falls in love with Snape stories that I have read in the past. You need to go through your writing as well, as spelling and grammar are a little off, not to mention you have some places where words are writtenlikethis or likhis and its rather difficult to understand meaning if you don't read over the same sentence a couple of times.
Never the less I am interested to see where you take this story and what your own spin on things shall be so I shall be continuing to read to find out where this goes, who knows my reasoning for such critique could easily be because you haven't gotten into the main part of the story yet (which is, more often than not, the case, I find). I am certain that you have something lined up, particularly with the fact that Malfoy and Harry/Alex aren't getting along so I am interested to see where that goes.
If you could email gypsy_willow90@hotmail.com when you update it would be greatly appreciated.
Never the less I am interested to see where you take this story and what your own spin on things shall be so I shall be continuing to read to find out where this goes, who knows my reasoning for such critique could easily be because you haven't gotten into the main part of the story yet (which is, more often than not, the case, I find). I am certain that you have something lined up, particularly with the fact that Malfoy and Harry/Alex aren't getting along so I am interested to see where that goes.
If you could email gypsy_willow90@hotmail.com when you update it would be greatly appreciated.
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I heart this story. You should update.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
0.o Wow. This is amazing! Fantastic! And every other adjective for great! Please continue this! I'm enjoying it so much!
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It said he went to the founders time in the story but when I looked in the stories you have written there whas no story about harry in the founders time. Please reply and update.
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it you have to write more immediately! I love time travel Snarry fics!
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please please please update it. Finish it please. This is a reall well written time travel fic.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thus I find myself so bored out of my mind that I am reading old fics, for once I'm glad I was bored! This was great, too bad you stopped...I think this could turned out to be a very big hit. Cheers. ^.~