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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like this story, hope you update soon. R/L smut would be good, more H/Hr smut would be great.
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
1. ObeseNecro sucks dont lisen to him
2. Yes you are missing a Beater so what
peopel make errors
3. I found this story yesterday and i think
its realy good so update
2. Yes you are missing a Beater so what
peopel make errors
3. I found this story yesterday and i think
its realy good so update
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story so far...but your missing a beater, you only have Terry Boot from Ravenclaw. As for the keeper, i don\'t think Ron would be considered the best keeper of the four houses, he\'s average at best. Yupps....Hogwarts Quidditch team sucks ass!!...and ya seem to be making an effort to place Ron on even grounds with Harry by making him more mature and shit like that. C\'mon, just because Harry and Hermione get together, doesn\'t mean you have to pair Ron up with someone so he doesn\'t feel left out, plus relationships that start quickly will most likely go down in flames...*CRASH*.
anyways SEE YA!!
anyways SEE YA!!
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes! I love this fic!!! So great. I love the hp/hg...
update soon please! its so good
update soon please! its so good
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I wholehardely supoort any and all fanfiction that supports Harry and Hermione as a couple. I like how you're pacing the plot along and I think it's pretty darn good. Update soon.
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September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the type of fan fics I truely enjoy when it comes to Harry Potter, slow pace (but not too slow) and a happy feeling to it. More focus on what can be good then what is bad, something most stories tend to miss.
As I said, a simple story thus far, but luckly it works pctlyctly here and lets things grow and move at a hearty pace.
Sure there isn't any fearsome action, twists and turns every few seconds, but for that we have JKR's books to handle that, here we have something that is diffrent and works well.
I do suggest this for anyone who is looking for a good romantic story, that isn't cheasy or over the top.
Also, I wolikelike to say how good it is to read a stroy this code, that has a good plot and character use to it.
Eat, drink, and be merry.
As I said, a simple story thus far, but luckly it works pctlyctly here and lets things grow and move at a hearty pace.
Sure there isn't any fearsome action, twists and turns every few seconds, but for that we have JKR's books to handle that, here we have something that is diffrent and works well.
I do suggest this for anyone who is looking for a good romantic story, that isn't cheasy or over the top.
Also, I wolikelike to say how good it is to read a stroy this code, that has a good plot and character use to it.
Eat, drink, and be merry.
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September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhh...so cute. Now, I'd like to see some more R/L action!!!!!